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Beauty Divine: A Love Poem
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04-23-2012, 11:00 PM
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Beauty Divine: A Love Poem
So guys tell me what you think:
In the city of angels in the lands of the sun there dwells a maiden fair Blue are her eyes like a moonlit sky and golden is her hair upon her lips a song so sweet it lulls the hardest heart to sleep sent from Heaven born of man the fairest one in all the land Her smile is a ray of sunlight that darkness can never touch and when she smiles it's as if a thousand springs unfold at once Never have I been so entranced nor heard a voice so fine How I pray for a day where I could call her mine On I'll go through the nameless hills singing the praise of beauty divine Last edited by About-A-Hobbit : 05-10-2012 at 07:10 PM. 
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05-10-2012, 03:32 AM
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Wow! That was really uplifting, especially for your muse, whoever she is. It reminds me of Eowyn, but I always see LotR characters in everything. Part of my obsession, I guess. LOL
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05-10-2012, 07:15 PM
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Thank You! yeah she inspires me very much
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07-13-2012, 03:00 AM
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Wow the poem is good. I sometimes think that girl should be pure from her heart, it is very much necessary. I will say that angels of the Almighty God wants that a girl should be very true and clean from heart.
Last edited by Cully : 07-19-2012 at 05:59 PM.
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